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hi Jodee-Lee. I like the background you used as it really shows what winter is about. Your snow flakes look fantastic. I like the interesting words you used as well. Next time you could use more colours.
hi Jodee-Lee I like your winter poetry it really stands out because it really does look like winter and I like the pretty snowflakes and snowman it made me fell cold. What is your favorite part of winter? Mine is drinking hot cocoa by the fire at night time.
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hi Jodee-Lee. I like the background you used as it really shows what winter is about. Your snow flakes look fantastic. I like the interesting words you used as well. Next time you could use more colours.
ReplyDeletehi Jodee-Lee I like your winter poetry it really stands out because it really does look like winter and I like the pretty snowflakes and snowman it made me fell cold. What is your favorite part of winter? Mine is drinking hot cocoa by the fire at night time.
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hi jodee-Lee i like your snow wat do you like all about this snow
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